Sample Cover Letter for Airline Security - Critique
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Sample Cover Letter Critique
Dear Russell,
For consistency, I used the same heading on your cover letter as
that on your resume. This affords a professional look to your "employment" package.
I began your cover letter by stating your interest in bringing
years of expertise in airline operations and ground security to
Fly Right Avionics Enterprises. I then wrote: "In these troubled
times, I know I can add to public safety and security in the transportation
industry."
I went on to write of your 20 years with US Airways, then bulleted
those skills that would interest a hiring manager. These included
your aircraft investigation experience, your work at security checkpoints,
and ground security training.
I then added another bulleted section to present your other skills,
including your 30+ years in the airline industry, your expertise
in dealing with government agencies (including the FAA), and your
ability to reduce absenteeism and occupational injuries.
I next restated the need for heightened security in these troubled
times.
I then wrote, "I will be calling you within the following week
to schedule an interview so that we might discuss this matter further." In
the industry, it's not only accepted, but expected that the prospective
employee contact the hiring manager, rather than waiting for them
to contact you. This puts you in the driver's seat. It also clearly
indicates your interest in the job.
I then ended the letter with the usual parting remarks.
All decisions to include or modify data were in keeping with the
guidelines and standards of the Professional Association of Resume
Writers (PARW). With this cover letter, you now have a powerful
tool that's well-organized, intriguing, and aesthetically pleasing.
It was a pleasure serving you again, Russell. Best of luck in all
your future endeavors.
CyberEdit Editor
Certified Professional Resume Writer
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